Wednesday, January 27, 2010

Story layout



For our next assignment we were to describe our first week back at school using an advertisement layout in order to get our point across. I got my inspiration from an add that was a single spread add, but I stretched it out in order to make it a two page spread.

4 comments:

  1. you followed the layout well & i like the structural boxes dividing everything up! i bet playing with watercolor in your pictures will look good!!

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  2. I really like how you drew interior spaces and scale figures in your layout. Adding watercolor will make your sketches pop though.

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  3. I like the contrast f the simple black and white that makes up the majority of your composition though it would be cool to see a bit more color. You laid the spread out in such a way that it appears very neat which in turn enhances the clean lines.

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  4. I like that the top half is less chaotic and more simple, and the bottom half really shows your work of the first week back. I also like the boxes and clean lines of it, because it's how real life works, you have dividers and different sections of your everyday life. Good job, Jamaan :).

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